*sylvan Symphony (School Assignment 9th) Poem by Jane Meyer

*sylvan Symphony (School Assignment 9th)

Rating: 2.7


<font color=darkviolet>The woods are like a symphony
playing their ever-lasting song.
To some it’s just cacophony,
but for me it is never wrong.
Because I listen for the notes,
understand what’s sung from birds’ throats.

I hear the wind through trees strumming
and the critters blowing their horns.
I can feel the acorns drumming.
Catch flowers trilling amongst the thorns.
For the woods are never silent;
a free mind unlocks the music meant.

(I had to make this about nature, have it feature a smilie, and use quite a bit of personification. I don't think I did too bad.)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Not bad at all! ! So loved the read, my kind of poetry! ; D

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HaZeM PaKKaR 23 March 2010

Well, this poem brought me back to childhood.. I still remember the drawing books I had.. filling black & white figures with my own colors, it really was my favorite hobby (now, I replaced it with Sudoku puzzle, lol) .. you used a very simple language to tell the story of a poet seeking to befriend the nature.. actually, you did it in avery smart way. thanks for sharing this! !

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