Swirling Around In The Desert Sky Poem by Juan Olivarez

Swirling Around In The Desert Sky

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Swirling around in the desert sky,
Where not even the ravens choose to fly.
Down off the mountains in a furious gale,
Darkening the desert sky so pale.

Sand, like needles cover all pores,
Bearing down relentlessly, with a terrible roar.
Turning miday into a dark stygian night,
Blurring out everything, killing all light.

Chasing all denizens far underground,
Terrifying all with a freight train sound.
From may to September, this is the norm,
One of a kind, the mojave sandstorm.

6/19/12 Alton Texas

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
If you have never experianced a mojave sandstorm. Be glad.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilson 21 June 2012

Wonderful description, a great write, pleased I`m not there.

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Heather Wilson 21 June 2012

Wonderful description of a mojave sandstorm, which I now have a far better chance to imagine. a great write Juan.

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Smoky Hoss 20 June 2012

Again my friend I must compliment you on your keen vision within the magical desert-land! It makes me wish I was there, right now... you know.

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Valerie Dohren 19 June 2012

Great poem Juan, very well written.

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