Swimming Poem by to those who wonder what life is about

Swimming



water is my excape
from my problems,
from my responsbilities,
from my list of things to do.
Swimming sends me to my own world
away from my normal life.
Feeling the rush of the water
hititng me face as I swim
across the lanes
only truning my head for air.
When I am swimming
all fears, all mistakes disappear
into the depts of the pool
and visions of my future
of where I want to be
rush into my mind
until I have to leave
the pool is a holding place
for my thoughts of the future
Within seconds of getting out of the pool
relaity snaps back.
only returing the next
time I go swimming

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evtita mater 10 June 2007

wow! this is a great poem! i am a swimer and this is exactly how i feel when i swim!

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Skye Love 02 June 2007

wow i totally agree with this poem its beautiful

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