Swim Submerged Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Swim Submerged

Rating: 5.0


FLYING flocks travel in flight,
another faulkner puts down his
shovel, and writes, writes, and
writes,
spare me the out cry,
spare me the empty familiar,
spare me muddled spirits,
and write the words with your
own red blood,
FLYING flocks travel in flight,
sextan turns up, with her freind
plath, and they both begine to
write, write, and write, yippee,
says the words, for these words
will end up in a paper back book.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Root 21 October 2006

Hi David, Very different, I like this poem, It's unique but your writing positive. Excellent write.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 20 October 2006

WHATTA DAY FOR WRITIN' & SINGIN' THEM 60'S CHARTBUSTERS! THEN AGAIN, I CAN'T SING A LICK ANYMORE....& LATELY WRITERS BLOCK HAS GIVEN ME THE KNOCK....S * * *, A * * * * ING RHYME....Wooooooosh! nice write! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 20 October 2006

WHATTA DAY FOR WRITIN' & SINGIN' THEM 60'S CHARTBUSTERS! THEN AGAIN, I CAN'T SING A LICK ANYMORE....& LATELY WRITERS BLOCK HAS GIVEN ME THE KNOCK....S * * *, A * * * * ING RHYME....Wooooooosh! nice write! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr

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Allan James Saywell 20 October 2006

paper back writerrrrrrrrrrr, paper back writerrrrrrrrrr, yippeeeeeeee good write david i enjoyed this one, worth a vote so vote i vote for your poemmmmm AJS

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