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Sweet Escape

Tell me you're mine forever
I will no longer stand if we can't stay together
Situations like this seem to be beyond my control
Intricate moments are a curse
Like a lonely book on an empty bookshelf
Who will be the first to get lost in the story?
Life is complicated yet beautifully chaotic
I never question God because he knows best
If my heart shall be rattled
Then I lose the battle
Desperate for love and not ashamed to show it
My life is a lie but you will never know it
Come on!
Challenge me when I'm in distress
Fate keeps pointing me in a different direction
And I always follow
But where am I really going?
Traveling while thinking is not my greatest fault
With my feet upon the ground
The earth feels shaky
Do you not trust me?
Be aware of the scars that make me undeniably human
You stupid fool
You are my sweet escape.

Submitted: Thursday, October 31, 2013
Edited: Friday, March 21, 2014


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  • Khairul Ahsan (11/4/2013 9:26:00 PM)

    Well, this is a wonderful garland of chaotic thoughts of chaotic moments peacefully threaded together to make a beautiful poem. No rhyme, but words flow out in a regular rhythm to take the readers along.
    'Like a lonely book on an empty bookshelf
    Who will be the first to get lost in the story? '
    I am sure, many will be interested, if the story is told so beautifully.
    'Life is complicated yet beautifully chaotic
    I never question God because he knows best'
    Only A few can see the complicated and chaotic life as beautiful, without questioning God's wisdom. You are truly an exception.
    'Desperate for love and not ashamed to show it
    My life is a lie but you will never know it'
    You have spoken for many!
    'Be aware of the scars that make me undeniably human'
    Understandable, but you could explain a bit more.
    'You stupid fool
    You are my sweet escape.'
    Smiles...couldn't have a better ending, perhaps!
    The title and the finishing line are eye catching.
    Overall, a beautiful poem that deserves a 10/10.

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  • Aqua Flower (11/4/2013 5:02:00 AM)

    I know a lot about the sweet escape...you portrayed it beautifully in your poem! You put the words together beautifully~

  • Patricia Grantham (11/3/2013 5:15:00 AM)

    Truly a sweet escape. Mind and body just floating around.
    Hurry and come down to the ground. Sweet Escape has
    loosed your chains and set you free. Enjoyed.

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