"Sweat&Quot; Poem by amir khan

"Sweat&Quot;

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Sweat, sweat, sweat
Everyone is in sweat
Of the presence in a place
Of the relations with a place

Of the locus, of the focus
In the monotony, in the weakness
Sweat, sweat, sweat
Everyone is in sweat

Love! The exaggeration, the emotion
Is nothing but a fraudulent facade
Attachment! The reality the affection
Is a thing mattering from decades

Indeed, sweat in the route of life
Could be a way to attachment
Infact, sweat be the cause in life
To breath, to stand upon, to "love" in life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ajaz K 18 June 2012

Nice poem........interesting reading!

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