Swans On The River, , , Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Swans On The River, , ,

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Sun rises in the east,
sunsets in the west. When
strong winds blow, don't always
know which way is best.
South always has been easy, I
Don't think that's the way to go.
But North has always had so many
Storms And Snow.

i've scritched and i've scratched,
so long to build this nest. Twigs,
and scraps have always, gratefully
wrapped. Some have broke and snapped.
I Fell at time or two. Got a little
twitterpated. Lost and had to start
a new. Curled up where the caged bird
sings, Took alittle nap for a year or two.

Woke up to a map, that led me to a book.
It's pages alot stronger, it said come,
and take a look. So a peek i took. And,
before i knew it, I was flying along a
brook. Beautifully it flowed, Caringly
it showed, another road. Back, to where
The Secret River Flowed!

Friday, December 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: gratitude,lesson
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 22 August 2022

Becca this poem is wonderful Bravo!

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Bharati Nayak 23 November 2018

- The struggles of the bird for building nest, not knowing where to go, then curled up where caged birds sings, then ultimately finds the book which shows her the way to the Secret River (of happiness) . A superbly crafted poem, thanks for sharing.

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Rebecca Navarre 25 November 2018

Thank you! .. Bharati, For such a heartwarming and beautifully kind reply! .. Your poetry holds ever depth, beauty and meaning, that's enlightening and so heartwarming, to all those reading! .. Thank you ever so much! .. God bless! .. T

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Bharati Nayak 23 November 2018

i've scritched and i've scratched, so long to build this nest. Twigs, and scraps have always, gratefully wrapped. Some have broke and snapped. I Fell at time or two. Got a little twitterpated. Lost and had to start a new. Curled up where the caged bird sings, Took alittle nap for a year or two. - - - - - - - - A wonderful poem of life's journey

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Rebecca Navarre 25 November 2018

Thank you! .. Bharati, For such a thoughtful and beautifully kind reply! .. Your poetry holds a deep beauty, powerful and kind, that touches readers hearts and minds! .. Thank you ever so much! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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