Survivor Poem by kelly kel

Survivor

Rating: 5.0


Silent lips, screaming heart
Putting together what fell apart

Finding clarity from confusion
Seeing reality through an illusion

Facing all fears by running away
Looking to the past to avoid today

Hearing the truth from words never said
Hitting rock bottom to move ahead

I can forgive, but I'll never forget
I could give up, but I'll never quit

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C.R. Clark 13 February 2009

This is a very well constructed poem, Kelly. Short and right on point.I like the way it ends. The one who survives is most often the one who simply refuses to quit.Best wishes. Richard

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~ Jon London ~ 10 February 2009

We live to fight another day, never submit never quit, goals are the gift

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