Surge Poem by David Lewis Paget

Surge



At Granite Island’s seaward side
We sat, and watched the surging tide,
The rapid rip, the capping crest,
The stinging spray, the ragged nest;
The long slow wheel of the sea bird, moaning,
The deep-felt urge of the white sea, foaming.

You laid your head on me, and cried:
'How long, how long? ' And I replied:
'This day is ours, and for the rest….
Ah well, ' I sighed, and sought your breast;
You turned, long-lost at the deep shades forming
While I caught tears at the tip of day, dawning.

12 October 1980

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Alldred-lugton 30 September 2005

I meant to add being conceived during the Second World War adds some sort of layer to ones psyche I was 22 12 48 Susan

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Susan Alldred-lugton 30 September 2005

This quite a poem Well done. Primitive but also from the heart with the references to nature making it universally understandable I would have given it 20 if that was possibleYou have been quite active lately a sign of something significnat going on inside you Writing poetry for me anyway, is very therapeutic Susan

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David Lewis Paget

David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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