Surfacing Poem by Nasra Al Adawi

Surfacing

Rating: 5.0


So you have stopped
Stood in solitude
Slid the world out of you
Invited the silence to calm you
Sighed pain and sadness
Lost your physical sensations
Surfaced away from your body
You feet are no longer
Tied in gravity of earth
You are:
A sprit that swims in the sky
Finally you understood
To touch the sky
You need not be a bird
Nor fly a plain
Just your sprit soul unchained

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Neville 23 July 2006

this is so what i needed to hear right now; thank you ~kelly

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Nasra Al Adawi 23 July 2006

Okay I got this comment from A friend and want to retain her lovely comment in here: Nasra, I really love this poem! It speaks of a spiritual world, and the seperation of the soul from the body in a very touching and endearing way. Good work! Patty

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Pemba - Tanzania
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