David Wood

Rookie - 339 Points (07 April 1950 / London)

Sunset


That glowing orb of yellow daffodil
Darkening from yellow to orange glow
From the west faint embers that thrill
A shimmering breeze that dips below
The horizon like a mirage in a desert of sea.

From the east darkness spreads its dark cloak
As night creeps slowly in what must be
The closing of the daylight hours now broke.
Sweet nature governs what you and I now see
That orb, now gone, just a dim faint glow
Marks the end of today and what may be.

Submitted: Monday, April 15, 2013
Edited: Monday, April 15, 2013

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Watching the sunset over Rhossili Bay on the Gower peninsular in Wales

Comments about this poem (Sunset by David Wood )

  • Gold Star - 9,724 Points Heather Wilkins (9/5/2013 1:41:00 PM)

    a beautiful description of nature and its wonders (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 532 Points Juan Olivarez (4/26/2013 1:10:00 PM)

    Beautifully descriptive poem. Very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amir Aizat (4/24/2013 1:07:00 AM)

    beautiful scenery nicely put into words.
    beautiful poem. :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,187 Points Walterrean Salley (4/22/2013 12:34:00 AM)

    I can see it. What a beautiful sunset. And thanks for sharing such a lovely scene with us. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 534 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (4/21/2013 3:25:00 AM)

    The lovely sun set is mirrored in your beautiful poem with rhyme and rhythm. Enjoyed it, David! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 701 Points Shahzia Batool (4/19/2013 2:24:00 AM)

    The imagery of the sun is remarkably set, it reminds me of Keats description of the sun-god: His palace bright,
    Bastion'd with pyramids of glowing gold,
    And touch'd with shade of bronzed obelisks,
    Glar'd a blood-red through all its thousand courts,
    Arches, and domes, and fiery galleries;
    And all its curtains of Aurorian clouds.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lyn Pendleton (4/18/2013 9:55:00 AM)

    Hi David, as much as I admire sunsets I tend to ignore the sun when possible.I sometimes have a
    strange phobia it will blow up the more I think about it, pay attention to it. HennyPenny syndrome or
    something. A wonderful write. I wish I could pick subjects so available. take care (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (4/18/2013 1:10:00 AM)

    Agreed with valerie this is a beautiful description of the sun truly a positive vibe nicely done (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,175 Points Valerie Dohren (4/16/2013 1:27:00 PM)

    A beautiful description of sunset David, very inspired. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Xxxxxx Xxxxxxxxx (4/15/2013 1:28:00 PM)

    A beautiful nature piece capturing a serene moment that so many of us take for granted. Very uplifting and so well written. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (4/15/2013 8:22:00 AM)

    A nice imagery 'sunset' yellow then orange, orbs now gone, very meaningful Mr.David Thank you (anapeastic start indicate the quick movement, so restlessness resides somewhere if I am not wrong then) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Heyyou Boy (4/15/2013 6:29:00 AM)

    A well written work. Enjoyed. Outstanding David! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 29,013 Points Gajanan Mishra (4/15/2013 5:58:00 AM)

    Marks the end of today. thanks. good write. (Report) Reply

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