(((Sundown)) Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

(((Sundown))

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The dusk is when the new day awakes
In the morning the sun is rising brightly
To welcome the horizon of beginnings
Reckons the blissful existence of life.

At high noon the sun stands still
To check on every living and dead
As though God is looking down
Admiring His creations.

As the sun commences to set
It looks creepy and sad
For those whose lives
Have to rest in peace.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 17 December 2008

Sort of like life, SUNRISE to SUNSET

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Ency Bearis 17 December 2008

nice simile poem...implied well about life..well penned...10 Ency Bearis

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Fiona Davidson 17 December 2008

Lovely write...you've captured the stages of the day so well...thank you

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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