Treasure Island

Unwritten Soul


Sun Alive In Moonlight Smile


Crystallized light
Perfecting on distant surfaces
As two lay promises and entwined
Glittering darkness with dusty bright
Be one now it becomes
In a piece of time
Here the story
The sun and the moon

(Sun)
Solar voice mesmerizing in a song
While the night still sleeping at noon
Read his write from bright heart
For the moon, for the moon
The only it was and still
By the sun, the sun
Forever it will
Reading this

'Moon,
Dear love,
To my friend
With the spark of ray
Crowned you my honor
With my sealed kiss on your face
I wished for perfection and then comes you
Oh moonlight thou enliven my love around the halo
A friend of mine, so priceless with a heart so true
Your little sweet bright carry my presence light
Shared to life in all night with your touch
From the other side of the world
I am the sun who waiting you
To meet you my dear moon
Whenever twilight comes
Share the shine'

(Moon)
Celestial sparking smiles
With stars blinking you a lullaby
Sleep well sleep tight my dear sun,
Thanks for reading me again and again
For me i listened your voice in my day dream
If you see around my face, your love is my halo
Tonight, read you mine, mine for you in night dream

'Sun, my dear one
We tied at the same sky
Say love to you my dear
For you sun i am here
Separated by a distance
Not a secret but not limited
We cant hold hands, never
Both feel each presence much
Your brilliant smile by morning light
Moon read tales sing lullaby at midnight
Opposite edge our faces lit with happiness
to shine the whole day and night through a space
A space of heart in universe enclosed love and grace'

(Sun and the moon sing together)
Captain of the day regards the Dark Knight
A perfect relationship, a perfect friendship
Cried the sun to the moon in poetry
Sets my heart aflame warm and warmer
Knowing you will always return to me
Thou shine so bright sun, you are all I see
the moon was so cool, so cool, so cool
a perfect interaction, a perfect attraction

O dear earth be witness on our oath
Where boundary is just a distance
But the distance nowhere for us to see
Because everytime always one we will be
Day or Night, Sun before moon
In between we dance with thee
Sun, earth, moon, we three
Friend we always be

Submitted: Wednesday, February 27, 2013
Edited: Friday, March 01, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

The poem is a collaborated work with Sunprincess, which was posted on her page, however due to some problems she had to turn down and asked me to posted it.So i reposted it here on my page.
The poem is dedicated to ALL our friends in PH We worked together so every line of her and mine blend randomly and it is an art when you hide poetry lines of yours sounds like others and others like ours. When i start the concept i imagine of two objects Moon and Sun having friendship and Earth presence make the aura of two much felt..as they three always has something to be, something call nature of friendship

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  • Chandra Thiagarajan (3/5/2013 9:54:00 PM)

    A wonderful collaborative work with Sun Princess- Sun, earth, moon we three / Friend we always be.-
    Captivating lines ! (Report) Reply

  • Thomas Hsi (3/5/2013 10:26:00 AM)

    Great poem, great talent. Powerful and eternal. Now bring Sunprincess back from where she has gone. (Report) Reply

  • Thomas Hsi (3/5/2013 10:26:00 AM)

    Great poem, great talent. Powerful and eternal. Now bring Sunprincess back from where she has gone. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (3/2/2013 3:32:00 PM)

    Soul and Rachel, a beautiful poem marked with your special stamp - a great collaborative effort. (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson (3/2/2013 11:54:00 AM)

    This is so rare and beautiful. i remember lots of things by reading this work. Well done soul and Rachel. this is just great. (Report) Reply

  • Anthony Di''anno (3/2/2013 9:08:00 AM)

    Soul and Sunprincess. This a very beautiful write. It is writing such as this that inspires me. Dragging the love from my meloncholy and opening my heart to all it's possibilities. These are not just words. They are bandages and soft kisses for a troubled soul. Thank you both for such exqusite healing words. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath (3/2/2013 5:49:00 AM)

    Entwined in such a way that it is impossible to recognize the lines as being Rachel's or yours.Loved Soul N Rachel. May the friendship live long! (Report) Reply

  • Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (3/1/2013 5:19:00 AM)

    first of all I would like to say that I enjoyed reading this poem, beautifully written. second of all the Sun does not have any other work, other than wooing the moon, only natural satellite and the playmate of the earth. Some how Unwritten soul has escaped from the accusation in the last stanza by calling all these three as friends, after singing a dream duet as shown in the Indian Movies ! well done Sunprincess and Unwritten Soul. (Report) Reply

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