Summer May Poem by erika maple

Summer May

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summer
summer blue
summer gray
summer may

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 24 February 2009

Well, there is not much here to comment on. Of course, poems should be short. Even this short. But this is essentially a rhyme. That's it. The problem is that it doesn't say anything. At least, nothing of discernible consequence. GW62

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