Suicide Pact Poem by Pasquale DiMeola

Suicide Pact



Hand in hand
The lovers jumped
Off the romantic cliff
Ecstatically drowning
In a sea of love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rhiannon Parvin 20 January 2010

k! well it's gud, but it's short and doesnt make sense! You shud make it longer n tell a part of da story before dis part so it makes sense, n has sumthin 2 tie it 2gether! I liked it tho!

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Pasquale DiMeola

Pasquale DiMeola

Newark, New Jersey
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