Suicide Poem by Mitzie Holstein

Suicide

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I thought of suicide
So I decided to check myself in
Totally against my morals
One of the greatest sins

I thought of suicide
To end life as it is
Hopelessly alone
Thoughts moving about like a drone

Ideas lurking
Mind becomes stagnant
Dark thoughts sleeping
My only tenants

Thinking of suicide
Bad state of affairs
Feeling deep inside that no one cares

Thought of suicide
And how it would end
No more in glory
Would my spirit ascend

So I checked myself in to the Man above
And He whispered softly
I'll send you my heavenly dove

Monday, October 20, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 October 2014

Very moving poem above five trying to ruin the gifts of heaven and Lo! heaven sending a Doce the peace bird to bring peace in thought and mind..of course suicide is a sin a crime of mistrust thank very positively ended thank you 10

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Mitzie Holstein

Mitzie Holstein

Jamaica; West Indies
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