Kelvin Owusu

Rookie - 134 Points (15-10-1988 / Ghana)

Suicidal Lies - Poem by Kelvin Owusu

I Said hi when I meant goodbye
It's not a lie, not do I lie, just a rare truth
Is not even that I like it when you cry
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Comments about Suicidal Lies by Kelvin Owusu

  • Elizabeth Padillo Olesen Elizabeth Padillo Olesen (11/6/2014 3:31:00 PM)


    This is a moving one, written with passion. Keep on posting and do not give up. (Report) Reply

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  • V S (9/9/2014 9:55:00 PM)


    when you cry I smile,
    when you ask I retract,
    when you hug I am idle,

    the last stanza is poetically sad and true...that is what we are doing to other human being....
    well done dear Kelvin Owusu..keep it up.. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das Neela Nath Das (9/9/2014 8:35:00 PM)


    Congrats! Loved reading this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Terry Craddock Terry Craddock (9/9/2014 5:12:00 PM)


    The last stanza soars before leap fatal, insightful and intriguing. (Report) Reply

  • * Sunprincess * (9/9/2014 4:57:00 PM)


    ............congratulations....I really like how you wrote this one....especially the second stanza.... (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul Lyn Paul (9/9/2014 7:57:00 AM)


    So open, so raw and unknown. The thinking begins.. Thank You Kevin (Report) Reply

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/9/2014 3:23:00 AM)


    Profound...lovely and congrats for the day selection (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad Akhtar Jawad (9/9/2014 2:28:00 AM)


    A beautiful poem, a well deserved selection of poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Pranab K Chakraborty Pranab K Chakraborty (9/9/2014 1:15:00 AM)


    Excellent the expression to illustrate the truth. Unique indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Chinedu Dike (9/9/2014 1:08:00 AM)


    Craftily created. A lovely piece. Keep it up and thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Elusion . (9/9/2013 11:03:00 PM)


    The juxtaposition of ideas here is quite riveting.
    Go Ghana. (Report) Reply

  • Babatunde Aremu Babatunde Aremu (9/9/2013 8:04:00 PM)


    Nice poem. However this is subject to different interpretation by the raeders (Report) Reply

  • Hunter Hunters Hunter Hunters (9/9/2012 11:42:00 AM)


    Owusu, ur poem is just true, I like it. If u don't mine take a trip true my poems (the fluke, break up, faith ect) (Report) Reply

  • Indranil Bhaduri Indranil Bhaduri (9/9/2012 8:16:00 AM)


    Mindblowing...Superb poem. (Report) Reply

  • Sunny Rose Sunny Rose (9/6/2012 9:30:00 AM)


    the title already captivated me wow what a poem (Report) Reply

  • Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (9/2/2012 8:08:00 AM)


    just a door, suicide, life on one side and we know not what on the otherBut the choice is something, maybe the
    only thing, we have control over.When we loose that choice there is nothing left to live for.....and we walk through
    that door......and shut it (Report) Reply

  • Justice Clarke Justice Clarke (8/30/2012 6:04:00 PM)


    Powerful and full of great depth (Report) Reply

  • Stevie Taite Stevie Taite (8/28/2012 1:56:00 AM)


    A guilty love of holding power over someone who has lost self worth. The attraction to someone that for some reason you feel ashamed of, (like a natzi over a Jew but not quite thet extreme) That is what I get from this interesting read. (Report) Reply

  • Elizabeth Padillo Olesen Elizabeth Padillo Olesen (8/27/2012 2:30:00 PM)


    This is one piece which I need to reread to get the gist of the whole thing. I am going out and I will reread this when I come back. Take care. You are really productive with three entries at one time. Great creations. (Report) Reply

  • Christina Williams (8/27/2012 2:17:00 PM)


    Sad poem but I like it. (Report) Reply










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