Suffery Poem by victoria mbali

Suffery

Rating: 5.0


I have suffered
I have felt pain
It's enough
Spare me

I have suffered
I have felt despair
It's enough
Spare me

They say what does not kill you makes you stronger
well
It weakens me every time this happens
It's enough
Spare me

Confession
I have lost an organ, it feels
'My mother'
I hate you death
It's enough
Spare me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sicelo Sithole 10 February 2010

I also feel your pain Mbali...Henry is right, let it out through writing

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 06 February 2010

Patience..keep it. The word patience falls short to suffering just by one letter only...so keep patience and things will fall back to the right place again. Whenever you feel like you're out of patience, just renew its license.. :) i've been doing that for last 4 years. I saying all this 'coz i can feel those words you wrote there, and i can feel it 'coz you wrote it very beautifully. Keep it up! !

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Henry Brown 05 February 2010

To suffer is life to overcome is victory-Victoria. I feel your pain...keep writing

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