Sudden Death Poem by Carl Mehmet

Sudden Death

Rating: 3.9


Sitting frameless in the chair of despair
Fiddling back and forth with the air
That a man is to stare an a frown... That be the chair
Bent forth a silent
glare
Nothing more nothing less a wide eye flare
Actions of a younger older
As time profound fell yonder
Fell a beast at ate helplessly falling down and down
Splat on to the ground
Pondered an older younger
Time spent nothing less more nothing
Now lay dead upon a puddle of red
How suddenly dead!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suzan Gumush 28 July 2007

Free flow of emotioms makes one a great poet. Best wishes suzan

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Michael Gale 14 March 2007

'I lay me down here-Dead as dead' would have been how i would have ended the last verse of this poem. This piece was excellently written. I had to give it a tenner kind sir of the written word. God bless all poets-MJG.

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Donna Hendra 30 November 2006

what kind of experience has made one so young so bitter. thats what my family all say to me whenever these kind of things pass my mind. maybe i should be myself more. just allow myself free emotions... this poem is very thought provoking. the title itself got me thinking. maybe i should just live for the now, for myself. sudden death.......

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Carl Mehmet

Carl Mehmet

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