Such A Late Goodbye Poem by Amir Foroughi

Such A Late Goodbye

Rating: 4.1


I gaze at the silent walls
It reminds me all the bloody halls
Where
There
I danced with you
Amid all angels' crawls
The walls are viciously cracked
They are all my remedies
To distract
Me from your transient kisses
From the time of melancholy harp
When my veins full of love freezes
So I wonder at life's short eternity
Twist of fate and sorrow
Why in me?
I gaze at the silent walls
It reminds me all spring tulips eyes
When the scent of being freezes
In the time of melancholy piano
In your voice of soprano
When it says rhythmically
Adiue…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 18 July 2009

A goodbye will make a longing laster and ever.Excellent piece Amir.

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Abdallah Gamal 18 September 2011

Wow! wonderful, full of passion and beautiful imagination. beautiful :)

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Nooruddeen Mm 09 October 2009

A nice one and touching Rgds Nooruddeen

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this is a silent sad poem, nicely written.

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a touching poem..sadly and warmly penned..

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~ Jon London ~ 18 July 2009

And the heart does grow fonder......excellent write...fine wording and the splash of imagery makes this a wonderful read....thanks for the share Amir 10+

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