(18th may,1983 / Nigeria)

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Succes My World

When I think success
I see it comes
When i dream success
I see it comes
When i touch success
It fates away
Success success
My hope

I'll find success
Embrace success
When i hold success
I'll keep it save
When I have success
I'll share it
Success success
My world

I'll rule
Yes, I'll influence
Thought, Oh thought
My Success Success
I'll keep,
I see
Success a life
Success my hope
Success my world

Submitted: Wednesday, June 10, 2009
Edited: Friday, July 17, 2009


Comments about this poem (Succes My World by Fiefa Bruce )

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  • Soe Myataung (11/11/2012 3:10:00 AM)

    Success my hope
    Success my world
    I like best that word.

    13 person liked.
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  • Arthur Tugman (11/28/2011 4:38:00 PM)

    Success succeeds expectations, failure exceeds predictions - Arthur Tugman

    13 person liked.
    12 person did not like.
  • Arthur Tugman (11/28/2011 4:38:00 PM)

    Success succeeds expectations, failure exceeds predictions - Arthur Tugman

    15 person liked.
    11 person did not like.
  • Arthur Tugman (11/5/2011 6:41:00 AM)

    Money can't buy success, but the lack of it can cause failure. - Arthur Tugman

    15 person liked.
    10 person did not like.
  • Sameer Ahmed (6/10/2009 12:32:00 PM)

    A very pragmatic approach displayed in this poem
    which is well-lit with an inspirational message in its
    essence. If one is stays focused on any objective
    he or she is destined to, success knocks the door
    with a repute......10

    11 person liked.
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