Subtle Poem by Adam Day

Subtle

Rating: 5.0


Like the ever growing breeze that sweeps across the land
The smell of your hair seeps through the sand
An ever growing hourglass drips at its soul
You lift me when I am weak
You speak to me so clear and bold
An always pessimistic voice
With so much cheer
This you do not realize brings me fear
But be as it may for you are the one for me in every which way
My heart skips a beat when you look at me
Gaze into the beauty for me to meet
My spirits are at there peek when you are around
Like a drifting bird high above the ground,
Soft subtle skin to gaze at for days smooth as a button as much I praise
You taught me to love yet you did not know
I feel for you deeply and my soul does grow
It will not stop for years to come
I will love you forever till my days are done
I will not let go of the times we have had
And I veer to the future for the moments we will have
The girl of my dreams I spoke to you once
I meant this to be true for you are the one
Till death due us part I will not look away
Like a precious flower that blooms everyday

(summer 2008)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C T Heart 24 September 2008

one of the nicest piece of love poems............Great! ! ! a 10.

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