Vera Sidhwa


Submission - Poem by Vera Sidhwa

Submission was a problem,
You entered my life,
It caused so much strife.
You took over me.

Submission was the problem.
I didn't wish to give in to you.
I didn't want to do,
All you asked me to.

Submission was the problem,
Now which way do I go,
My decision came slow.

I left you.


Comments about Submission by Vera Sidhwa

  • Freshman - 607 Points Rekha Mandagere (8/9/2013 6:03:00 PM)

    The poem is beautiful but submission is nothing wrong. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 8, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 28, 2013


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