Subconsciousness Corrupted Poem by Mark Crane

Subconsciousness Corrupted

Rating: 4.5


Spawned within decaying carcasses of dying flies
Feasting upon the fetid flesh of the obstinate
Lubricious, slithering, sly force ever obdurate
Devouring innocence with poignant, pernicious lies
- Wake up! -
Stare unyielding deep into your fear's decree
Inhale it's reeking breath; feel it's acid etched caress
Foul vitriolic tongue poisoning subconsciousness
Crawl inside the vile depths of it's inane soul; what is it you see?
- Stand up! -
Dare to pierce the horrid monsters blackend heart
Claim emancipation; shed thine corrupted, riddled skin
For the morrow brings with it a new dawn; time to begin
What will thy do with the precious rare gift of a fresh start?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanya Stanford 11 September 2008

Brilliant use of words to express the deepness of this poem. Scary mental pictures. Well done on this one.

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Leela Devi 20 June 2008

deep thoughts...........................what next

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Mark Crane

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Williams Town Australia
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