Stupid Fairy Tales Poem by Steven Iceberg

Stupid Fairy Tales

Rating: 5.0


They're came riding horses
Lot's of males
Unlock the tall tower
Stupid Fairytales


The good one wins
Every single time
Cinderella got to the ball
But you'll never be mine


I'll sit in my tower
Dream and believe in you
Then reality comes along
Fairytales aren't true


Theres no wolf
Or rapenzuel's hair so strong
So I'll just wake up
In reality is where I belong

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Johannes Yeboah 24 April 2009

Awoken from the Dream? ....anyway, i think u do write good poems wen u re in a good mood-that is, wen u re happy and there's peace in ur heart and ur soul, but not wen u re angry(could sense a lot of anger in this one) .try as much as possible to eliminate the anger and put ur words ryt, ok? ..but hey, i still give u ma 10 cos I know wat u re capable of!

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