>Struggle Poem by Abdul Wahab

>Struggle

Rating: 4.5


An odd awareness
Rushes up creating nausea

Going down rattling
An ultra sensitive thought

straight from the back of my head
a massive crash!

the process of thinking stopped!
I look back with closed eyes- - -

just to live
…………..pretending
………………………bigotry
……………………………...cheating
………………………………………..schemes and
…………………………..…………………………..lies

No struggle
No protest
In life?

Would the depth of understanding
And the height of ethics be lost from life with out direction?

Must have to win
In the battle of life

Or retracement will take place from that iron determination
Or will they push you down
Slowly
……..little
…………..by
………………little
………………………step
……………………………by
………………………………step?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Sehgal 13 June 2013

great write.. may be if we think less and live more.. there would be less of a struggle..

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Soumita Sarkar 12 June 2013

an unique presentation...........credits-credit-credit.........

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R.j. Wynn 06 June 2013

Really well done, good effort, clear.

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Heather Wilkins 06 June 2013

love this form. Something different. Excellent.

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