Strong Companion Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Strong Companion

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Find strong companion
Who offers strong relation?
The bond shall then convert into relationship
The life ship may sail through non stop

Life is like pond
Where you find colorful friends
They move from one end to another
Eyes find them to look lovelier

I love my friends from heart
I take their name and start
Each day with prayers
“O god, grant them happiness with offer

I love to find them again
Feel their presence and pain
I am very much part of their existence
Let them enjoy even at far distance

I miss but rejoice too
As they are my future promise
I put my head on their shoulder
And feel at home with touch in hair

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 March 2014

Strong companion Find strong companion Who offers strong relation?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2014

When the wish is pure, it doesn't matter if some words stammer. Some expressions and similies are excellent. Warm regards, Supratik Sen, Hyderabad Mar 26,2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2014

nicely philosophical and sublime words becoming of a veteran writer. thanks for sharing this great poem, dear Husmukh Ji. partha sarathi paul, guskara-burdwan Mar 26,2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2014

Gail Desautels GmbH dog brushed my hair yesterday with paw.. No friends hete 21 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 March 2014

Rajesh Jaiswal and JaiRam Tiwari like this. Rajesh Jaiswal ??? ???? ???? See Translation 45 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 March 2014

Your Poem Kylie Fultineer31 minutes ago Nice use of figurative language, the near-rhyme is especially appealing Your Poem Kylie Fultineer31 minutes ago Nice use of figurative language, the near-rhyme is especially appealing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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