*strong And Independent Woman Poem by Ana Z. M.
*strong And Independent Woman
****I'll write from the bottom of my heart.. this time i wont try for it to rhyme.. or for it to sound pretty.. i'll just keep on writting each thought that my heart has been screaming for 15 years... and till today they'll be heard..
POEM: STRONG AND INDEPENDENT WOMAN
I was your dream, everything you wished to have.
You played with me, you sang baby lullabies to me.
You always treated me right, you always made me your number one..
It was only dad, you, and me...
your very dream come true,
a family...
Dad's ex-wife dumped her children at our perfect place..
Your dream now ended..
But you always strong and independent woman,
took the desision to make them your family too..
You took care... five of them, and me..
Two years later, just when i had two years of age..
Dad money was stolen, we were left with nothing..
He came home depressed, without any force to keep on moving..
He had left a family with no home..
with nothing to eat
with nothing to survive..
But you always strong and independent woman,
you, by your own, grabbed some force,
you didn't give up,
you never did,
you always faught...
You made a new home,
you fought for us,
Strong and independent woman,
I'll always admire you for that..
But as you worked day and night,
There was a little girl who dreamed to be with you..
Less than a year...
You were detected a horrible desease..
But as always I AM PROUD TO TELL
strong and independent woman
you kept on fighting for us...
Day by day
you kept on fighting..
dad took care of us,
you were always out of home..
and when you came back...
you always faught with dad...
I always dreamt of having you back...
like those days you sang to me,
those days we played..
Mom fifteen years have gone by..
I will always love you for what you have done,
I will always be proud of you,
and you wil always be my everything...
But for at least one day,
I am hopping to be your everything back again..
I am hopping to have a mother's love for one day..
That's all I am asking to life,
That is my only reason to cry as I am right now..
Mom..
My strong and independent woman..
I MISS YOU...
A whole story, not just a poem. I liked it. Sentimental, from the bottom of your heart. Valuable. Thanks.
vow! beautiful. your love for da and above all mom is so nice, deep and expressive.i like this poem for the way it is expressed and for its contents in the most humanitic and lovable way. above all you as a winess and young child of the family are a wonderful person.god bless you and your family. love surya
you got me a tear in my eye. hats off to you and your Mom.she must be as proud of you as you are of her.........may god bless both. Read my peom called LET HER NOT SACRIFICE ANYMORE.....u shall like it
Ana, this is written from the bottom of your heart, it is filled with so much admiration, understanding, love of your mother. She has gone through alot, and you have given her the space inwhich she has needed to build the strength that only a woman knows. This is one of the most sincere writtings I have read of yours. Be kind, patient, and in the end it does prevail, that the love of your mom for you is there, it is only preoccupied at the current time.....
My heart bleeds as I read each line, so sad, very very sad I nearly weep. Good for you, you still have a mother to love. A mom is always a mom no matter what. I admire this work, lovely.
Very touching ann. the mood is sad and the message reaches home with beautiful simplicity. I admire your intrest in poetry at 15. Congratulations you can reach to greater heights.
Very touching....true words from the heart...very somber....God bless
Ana, Rhyme and rhythm don't make poetry, it is the heartbeats that create the rythm in it. I can hear your heartbeats for your Mom in this poem. Salute to the perfect woman! ! ! ! CP
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ohh sweet dear young girl.. yes, , its really from the depth of you heart, .. you wrote it with a strong warm feelings.. sooo amazing.. hazem al...