Striking [now Trying To Be Haiku Too] Poem by Tom J. Mariani

Striking [now Trying To Be Haiku Too]



Striking is the difference
In the color of her made-up face
And her stark white ankles
That are flashing at me

[orignianl above, below attempt at Haika with same title as original]


Striking

The difference between
Made up face stark white
Ankles flashing at me

[So, how did I do with Haiku? ]

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Tom J. Mariani

Tom J. Mariani

San Francisco, CA
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