Straightening Waves Poem by Unwritten Soul

Straightening Waves

Rating: 4.5


Whispering again,
About yesterday jokes
Smiling and laughing
In your eyes...
Still got hopes to see...
Running under blue sky
Miss to walk along the beach
Sadly even chair you cant reach
Only laying on the bed
Staying like living statue
Dreaming, hoping and praying

Told you to keep believe
For hope exist, no way grieve
You smiled...bitter a little
Pain shattered in the middle
Strong in you will define
To straightening wave lines
Can it be or need refined?
Will construct a chance reel
Medicine and pill treat psycho feel
Is it working for real..?
Then again, your chapped lips sealed
How many times u ask.?
No answer for future that i'm not hold

Exhausted by chemo,
Sometimes you shame to show
Tear duct still active but passive body
to flow warm dew from your eyes obviously
companied by hair fall...

I said, where's your smile?
Your body here but soul a mile..
You Speechless, watching birds through window
Ambition to fly still like beautiful rainbow
Hard vocalize words to speak
Voiceless...but my mind can read
Told you to keep believe
For future, still left some relieves
I'm stranger but stick as relatives
I don't know you but I'm with you

Our end now slowly to reach
And each breathe you count
Breathing with fire, exhale desire
Never afraid when it is time to fly higher
Our time is unpredictable
Death by fate, fate undeniable
But now, i'm with you
Always with you

One day we all in short queue lines
Already booked a ticket since our born time
We all waiting there in departure station
Going to forever destination
This all upon our completion creation
Where's death come after life joined
And 'end' ending the start point

Tell you again to believe
Secret future only God hold
So give up should not be told
Fight and strength to bold

Paint vein with deep pain
Cant change but faith to gain
World still no end to pass
Just smile, raise your glass
Elegantly confident in class

I'm with you..with you
Till the world divides

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nimal Dunuhinga 13 November 2010

A great tribute to the saddest victims of Cancer and with the staightening waves you take us all to witness the peril and its periphery!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 October 2017

Though it is a blues poem yet it has full of hope and inspiring. The compassion, empathy and hope of a poetess has been reflected here clearly. It is sure oneday oue bodies will be mingled with dust still we can enjoy jokes by smiling or laughing. Chemo can bring a cancer patient smile in her or in his lips. Body is perishabe but soul is immortal. It will take next birth as per karma, so we mustn't be worried. Dear soul, your expression on pain and hope is touching and didactic. Let me quote some lines here... . We all waiting there in departure station Going to forever destination This all upon our completion creation Where's death come after life joined And 'end' ending the start point Tell you again to believe Secret future only God hold So give up should not be told Fight and strength to bold Paint vein with deep pain Cant change but faith to gain World still no end to pass Just smile, raise your glass Elegantly confident in class I fully appreciate this poem. Full vote.

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Rebecca Navarre 29 May 2017

Every Single Word Absolutely Beautifully Told! ! ! ! ! Love, Strength And Faith Always Hold! ! ! ! ! ...Tell You Again To Believe, Secret Future Only God Hold, So Give Up Should Not Be Told, Fight And Strength To Bold. Excellently Penned All The Way Through! ! ! ! ! Another Powerfully Heart Felt Poem From You! ! ! ! ! Thank You Dearly For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! God Bless! ! ! ! ! Many Many Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++ Saved! ! ! ! !

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Christopher Tye 13 July 2016

Very moving poem, sadly life can throw some harsh things at us but our spirits always seem to be able to fight on.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 February 2016

Breathe! To walk along and to respect nature. Nice piece of work.

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Kevin Carney 16 November 2010

Words that need to be said, so heartfelt and thoughful. Your compassion and hope show straight through through your words. Great write on the sadness and hope of overcoming sickness. Thank you for sharing.

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