Suzette Richards

Rookie - 40 Points (Cape Town, SOUTH AFRICA)

Stolen Moments - Poem by Suzette Richards

Your key does not fit the door.
We cannot meet anymore.
I have tried to say 'Goodbye',
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

It was suggested that this may be suitable for a song, so I have added a refrain:

Stolen moments
Stolen moments
are all we have
My resolve cave
Only stolen moments

Comments about Stolen Moments by Suzette Richards

  • Bronze Star - 2,951 Points Cynthia Buhain-baello (6/20/2014 7:09:00 PM)

    Fantastic emotions and strength of lines, touching the human heart with intensity. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 22,327 Points * Sunprincess * (6/20/2014 6:42:00 PM)

    ............a romantic write.....congratulations on poem of the day.... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,181 Points Leslie Philibert (6/20/2014 9:22:00 AM)

    Good job, has a lyrical feeling, the central theme is however not exactly new. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,068 Points Babatunde Aremu (6/20/2014 7:22:00 AM)

    Good job! I like it. Keep on writing (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 613 Points Lawerence Mize (6/20/2014 3:24:00 AM)

    Nice poem. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,738 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (6/20/2014 12:54:00 AM)

    I hope and pray that life showers happy moments on you as a rightful owner and you no longer have to steal them...why must happiness be entwined with sadness and farewell? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 343 Points F. J. Thomas (6/9/2014 8:45:00 AM)

    How lovely dear Su; I had to return in some fashion ;) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 913 Points Stephen W (6/20/2013 10:09:00 PM)

    A nice poem.
    With breath-taking insolence I offer the following:

    Your key no longer fits the door.
    We cannot meet anymore.
    I have tried to say 'Goodbye',
    but you will be the one to try
    and keep this pledge as we did before.

    The champagne is standing chilled,
    ready for our glasses to be filled.
    The lights are turned down low,
    and the music is playing very slow,
    For this last meeting by me willed.

    The coded knock upon the door
    signals me to quickly pour
    the glasses to half measure.
    I let in my life's treasure.
    Your presence fills my very core.

    Our bodies hungrily entwine
    fuelled by the ample wine.
    Passions are riding high
    as you finally say, 'Goodbye.'
    I know you will always be mine. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nirmal Gope (6/20/2013 3:43:00 PM)

    I am from Bangladesh, now staying in USA for study, I want to translate it to my language, Bangla. Can I? I am urging a permission to poet. The poem is awesome. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Adriana Avila (6/20/2013 11:18:00 AM)

    The stolen moments are beyond precious and the loving feeling is inmmense; but the good-bye's are very heart-breaking. Nice one

    Blessings,
    AA (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,279 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/20/2013 7:39:00 AM)

    Really wonderful, good one, heart touching. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Captain Cur (6/22/2012 4:39:00 AM)

    Well thought out piece of writing. Has the theme of an
    Illicit love or impossible relationship that can only survive
    for brief intervals. (Report) Reply










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