Still There Poem by Autumn Winds

Still There

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Across the plains and grassy fields
Under skies of blue
The memories will rest forever
Eternally residing there
Memories of battles fought
Memories of love and lives
Will always be there
Etched into what remains
Ruins and pondered mysteries lie still
Like words written long ago
Silent whispers echo throughout the ages
Ungulating so thin
Its almost mere nothingness
But it is there
Even when we are long gone
What we did will still be there

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dale Mullock 14 October 2012

I string of words that etches deeply in to the heart fo the reader... when you throw a stone in the water, it ripples out as it is stirred but a few moments later the water will be still again with no evidence that a stone was thrown... however under the surface the water's bed is forever changed and will be remembered by those of the time of when it landed, even if forgotten by the sands of time. Deep and good poetry here!

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