Still I Stand Still Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Still I Stand Still

Rating: 5.0


Still I stand here, speechless,
Where I was left to mourn,
Still in a state of slumber I am,
Unperturbed, unmoved.

Like a weeping deodar cedar
I stand, mourning my lost time,
With no bird on my branches,
No butterfly on my flowers.

The breeze gently ruffles my leaves,
The rain washes away my tears.
The moonlight still generously glows on me,
While I stand speechless, alone!

Still I look for the face
That held all my dreams.
Still I await the compassion
That touched me in all tenderness.


Dhaka
26 July 2016

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Based on the experience of a friend of mine.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 08 September 2022

Loved last two lines....a fantastic poem

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Khairul Ahsan 09 September 2022

Thank you dear poet Dr Dillip K Swain. Much appreciate your kind appraisal.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2016

I look at the face which comes in dream in love and still I stand still. Very interesting composition is shared really.10

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Khairul Ahsan 01 June 2020

Thank you, Kumarmani Mahakul, for your kind comment and generous rating.

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Kelly Kurt 29 July 2016

Many of us have felt this sadness of love lost. Well written, Khairul

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Khairul Ahsan 30 May 2020

Thanks for the empathy, @Kelly Kurt. Pleased to have your comment on my poem.

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B.m. Biswas 28 July 2016

a beautiful love poem...though a sense of loss..... a real picture of a lost love....... the execution is imitable...the metaphoric use of the tree is the essence of the greatness..as I think.. of this great poem....thanks for sharing....10++++

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Khairul Ahsan 29 May 2020

Thank you so much, dear poet @B.m. Biswas, for the very inspiring comment you left here. It made my day!

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