(sterling Park) -Haiku- Poem by ray Schreiber

(sterling Park) -Haiku-

Rating: 2.6


dreaming of wood sprites
on the bench in Sterling Park
'coyote warning! '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruth Walters 20 February 2010

The magazine I submit Haiku to doesn't allow you to 'tell' only 'show' in haiku which I find very frustrating but I notice you allow the 'tell' words in. Ruthie

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ray Schreiber

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Mechanicsburg, Pennsylvania USA
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