Stepdaughter's Response..... [my Stepdaughter's Poem Response To My Poem 'Bri's 'Forced-Visit' To The Finger Lakes, Sept.2014; Personal; Very Short; Humor] Poem by Bri Edwards

Stepdaughter's Response..... [my Stepdaughter's Poem Response To My Poem 'Bri's 'Forced-Visit' To The Finger Lakes, Sept.2014; Personal; Very Short; Humor]

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Reading your poem was quite a surprise!
Your airplane ticket dates, would you like to revise?

I'm sorry the situation is so terrible,
hopefully your other accommodations will be bearable.

And if it helps you feel less pain,
just imagine me suffering (instead of you) under mom's reign ;)

(July 2014; written by Moae)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
my stepdaughter, MOAE, helped me obtain plane tickets for a trip east, as outlined in my recent poem 'Bri's Forced-visit To The Finger Lakes, Sept.2014) . i sent the poem to her and some friends and relatives i may sponge off.....i mean visit.
in keeping with my humorous style (i SAY it is humorous, so it IS!) , moae wrote this cutie. thanks, moae! :) bri
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tony Karas 13 July 2014

Give her a huge (THUMBSUP! ! ! ! !)))) from me! ! ! !

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Chuy Amante 09 July 2014

wow, what a write! best things about new moms and babies is the way they bite

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Noreen Carden 09 July 2014

Nice one Moae She's got your number Bri

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