Stay Drunk On Writing Poem by Chen-ou Liu

Stay Drunk On Writing



A Haiku Sequence

writing haiku...
the cock crows
as if possessed

the vacuum humming
I revise
a spring haiku

color of the sky
like a cat dead for weeks
my summer haiku

a pause
between haiku
half-moon

writing haiku...
autumn sunlight breaks
through a wall of gray

winter solstice
a haiku lost and found
in my dream

the porridge
on my coffee-stained desk
rewriting haiku
(for Jack Kerouac)

Tuesday, May 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,moon,seasons,writing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 09 May 2017

Your perceptions are pared down to a naked moment. The naked present is where everything begins and ends, but sometimes we dwell on past and future, so overlook it, and it dwindles. I like the hum of the vacuum cleaner, insisting that life outside of this sentence-hunting hobby must go on. At the same time, the vacuum cleaner's monomaniacal sound parallels your own determination to banish all flaws from your writings. I got my start writing poetry with haiku, and I remember that time fondly. I think it helped train my eye.

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