Stay Alive Poem by Terry jones

Stay Alive

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threw all the pain,
thew all the stress,
threw all the sadness,
threw all the tears,
i know youve been hurt,
but you must not dwell,
on thoghts of death,
it dosent matter,
whut thay say,
all that matters,
is your here today,
your hearts been broken,
i can tell,
i can see it,
on your face,
i can see it,
in your eyes,
no matter whut,
im here for you,
so all i ask in return,
on verry little thing,
just pleas,
stay alive

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tiffany Fawcett 26 March 2009

Very very well written. I really get the message. I went through the same thing. My sister slost her love and tried to kill herself. I thought she would succeed but we talked her out of the state. Trust me, it will past. You can't always have a broken heart because someone is gonna come and fix it for you. Please if you have the time, take a look at my poems and comment on them as wel. Thanks so much. Love ya, Tiff.

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Marcella D 29 November 2009

really nice poem you have writen

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Halfway Broken Halfway Here 05 September 2009

this poem is so so good and so so true....ive been where the person this was wrote for has been and if only someone had told me they cared that i mattered and to stay alive...well i wouldnt have done half the things i did....very good poem

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Amanda Ford 04 June 2009

wow great poem! ! ! i hear the same thing from my friend, but you say it so much better... thanks for writing this, i think it might help me ~amanda lynea~

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James Mclain 13 April 2009

Sometimes it takes forever and a day it seems to long to wade a river long and deep in loss of sleep...iip..thanks you

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Annie Girl 03 April 2009

strong words and the meaning is strong

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