State Of Mind Poem by Rini Shibu

State Of Mind

Rating: 5.0


Purpose and plan is in his mind
Complicated map is in your hand
The way is narrow and door is locked
Where to start and how to end
Puzzles and riddles twisting in mind
Face is blank with a smile

Friday, April 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: hiding,mind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 20 April 2018

Rini, I like your mind poem. We wonder what the plan is.

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Rini shibu 20 April 2018

Thanks Robert for your comment..!

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Carl Roussell 20 April 2018

Life is what you make it. Trying not to let the roadblocks get in the way.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 December 2022

A magnificent poem dear Rini....Well penned. Full marks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 July 2018

Puzzles and riddles twisting in mind Face is blank with a smile........so enchanting. A beautiful poem nicely executed.10

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Seamus O Brian 23 April 2018

To unlock the mind of another, such a daunting task. I enjoyed how you create your own mystery in the mind of the reader with this one. :)

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 20 April 2018

Face is blank with a smile Yes, such a mind-blowing poem will do it with us. Thanks dear Rini for this lovely poem. 10+++++

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Rini shibu 20 April 2018

Thanks Subhas for your compliments..! !

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Deep Paul 20 April 2018

Where to start and how to end Puzzles and riddles twisting in mind Face is blank with a smile.....nice lines...resonates with me. Thanks for sharing.

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Rini shibu 20 April 2018

Thanks Deep Paul..! ! !

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