Starlight Poem by David Wood

Starlight

Rating: 5.0


Bright Star
Lone splendour hung
Loves sleepless eremite
Gazing down upon this poor Earth
with mirth

Sunday, August 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and loss,love and pain,stars
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In memory of John Keat's poem Bright Star
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 August 2015

John Keats still lives through your poem. It is beautiful.

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Kelly Kurt 30 August 2015

A wonderful poem, David. My one suggestion would be to change the second occurrence of the word bright to brilliant, or some other adjective

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David Wood 31 August 2015

Hi Kelly, I changed second line as per request.

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