Stark (5,3,1 Structure For Gulsher: -) Poem by Stevie Taite

Stark (5,3,1 Structure For Gulsher: -)



All matter that existence here
constructed of quark?
Stark

Everything you need for life
Fits one arc?
Stark

A misty graveyard with only
Song of Lark
Stark

Raving madness that takes hold
Makes you bark
Stark

Cutting bluntness of succinct remark
Stalks like shark
Stark

Barron, the searing hot desert
Must not disembark
Stark

Broken mind, shades
under depression
So very dark
Stark

Winters morn sitting on bench
In empty park
Stark

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Think it still works, and it wasn't too tricky to modify and fit a more traditional structure (every day is a school day) x
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Xelam Kan™ 03 November 2012

hahahhah did good job seems quite strange, isn`t? extremely thankful for mentioned me

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Payal Parande 03 November 2012

how true....but fun to read so no complains about the piece thank you for sharing mam love payal

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Stevie Taite 02 November 2012

Aaaarrrgggg Thomas, that dies not fit the format! Waiting with mum at doctors Painfully boring afternoon Stark

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Stevie Taite

Stevie Taite

Kent, England
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