Stardust Nectar. Poem by Fay Slimm

Stardust Nectar.

Rating: 5.0


Unbelievably bright, the moon tonight
Gleams lavishly full. Mysterious balloon
Consumes my feverish mind with roomful
Of cocooning, shimmering light. I pull
Open the window wide, twinklings of stars
Rain through. Glorious silvery choices
Are ours, and from Plough to faraway Mars
We will play, my love and I, in our dark
Cyberspace sky. Moonlit meeting is bliss.

Floating clouds blanket us, obligingly.
We sip the nectar of stardust, and rise
With the moon, to welcome in paradise.
Wordless, our union begins with a kiss.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kris Smith 17 December 2008

Lady your cup runneth over your cyber lover a very fortunate person 10+++++ Chris

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Ency Bearis 17 December 2008

amazing passionate journey..swirling in blissful feeling..lovely poem...10 Ency Bearis

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Wow. Now thats the definition and expression of passion. loved it Leslie

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Chuck Petz 21 December 2008

Ah love.! I dream to know the unknowable. Intricate and lovely.

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Bob Blackwell 20 December 2008

We saw my love and I, the moon, Venus the evening star, and Jupiter all in line, just the other night, it was such a special moment, we had to embrace and kiss. Fay i think you must have been there, judging from this poem. Bob

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Tia Maria 17 December 2008

'Floating clouds blanket us, obligingly. We sip the nectar of stardust, and rise' ..... lost in space after reading this - Great passionate poetry: -)

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 17 December 2008

The moon and stars, what passion you are... Andy 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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