Standing On The Seashore Poem by Indira Renganathan

Standing On The Seashore

Rating: 5.0


Standing on the seashore alone
A loving privacy from too afar
Fell into my sight so bizarre
Can't tell how sportive they were
'cause it's their intimacy
The sky and the horizon

A beautiful vista vast, incredible
Inviting and so much tempting
To embrace...but impracticable
Before I could do anything
Born the golden prince enticing

Excited my anxiety threw flying kisses
As by speed post to the new born
That a happy wind took themfast
Each kiss singing birth day cheers
Ah, playing that prince golden
In hide and seek with my kisses

Thursday, March 28, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,sun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 08 April 2019

What a marvellous poem! Early morning sunshine is spell binding! A mother's thousand kisses for her beloved child. You made my morning, dear Indira Madam! .........100

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 April 2019

You have noticed a loving privacy and noticed the seashore. A beautiful vista which is vast and incredible amazingly motivates mind. This is interestingly penned.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 April 2019

Excited my anxiety threw flying kisses As by speed post to the new born That a happy wind took themfast Each kiss singing birth day cheers Ah, playing that prince golden In hide and seek with my kisses.....touching expression. It is really a beautiful poem having nice execution.10

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M Asim Nehal 30 March 2019

Articulate poem, I quote my fav lines 10+++ A beautiful vista vast, incredible Inviting and so much tempting To embrace...but impracticable Before I could do anything Born the golden prince enticing

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Valsa George 30 March 2019

Early in the morning, staying by the seaside in perfect tranquillity, watching the sunrise is beautifully transferred into a lovely poem. Here I find the delight of a mother looking into the face of the newborn with overwhelming love. It is always a marvelous spectacle to watch the sun emerging from the point where the sea touches the horizon.

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