Diane Hine

Silver Star - 4,112 Points (25 July 1956)

Squirrels - Poem by Diane Hine

Two siblings parted in a late
Cretaceous forest
and both prospered
and proliferated
and radiated.

Rather than let a surplus rot
primates gorge
and squirrels hoard.
If squirrels were big and brainy
and we were not,

they’d find it easier than us
to leave the pie in the cupboard
the tar in the sand
the oil in the shale
the coal in the crust.

Comments about Squirrels by Diane Hine

  • Silver Star - 4,048 Points Kevin Patrick (11/10/2013 11:06:00 PM)

    Humor and wry social commentary give you a hypersensitive understanding of the problem we face today, for the supposedly the most intelligent life on the planet we sure do go through quite a bit. I'll think of this when I see a squirrel next time. Thank you Diane (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,015 Points Yasmeen Khan (11/2/2013 12:32:00 AM)

    A poem with a nice message and dear Valsa has said much about it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,456 Points Valsa George (10/21/2013 11:19:00 AM)

    Squirrels store nuts in the granary for using during times of starvation as a reserve stock and never let them rot. We human beings like primates gorge and over exploit natural resources. If we had learnt to reserve some of the minerals and other natural resources in their own source of origin for later use, how great it would have been! A poem with a beautiful message! (I wonder if my interpretation is right) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,194 Points David Mclansky (10/21/2013 5:10:00 AM)

    Turn forgootten acorns into
    Methane Gas
    Annd remmember sweetly
    This too will pass (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 481 Points Danny Draper (10/20/2013 3:37:00 AM)

    Squirrel, squirrel Professor Quirrel, divergent thought and acorn pie, the past but wonders and the present lies. Maybe. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (10/20/2013 2:59:00 AM)

    Hypothetical assumptions pertaining to this beautiful rodent have awakened a new interest in me to observe three or four squirrels visiting our front yard very often. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Mark Dillon (10/19/2013 7:06:00 AM)

    Perhaps, perhaps, perhaps. Nice write and goodafter thought Diane. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 22, 2013

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