Spring Poem by koyel mitra

Spring

Rating: 5.0


When Nature dresses itself in perfect beauty then it's Spring,
Here people's hearts hear a new ring;
Under the canopy of trees with dark leaves,
A sigh of relief a lover heaves;
This yields a lover's heart's sand-dunes,
Cuckoos sing sweetly in multi-tunes;
Timorous lambs skip with joy,
It's definitely a time to enjoy;
Nature expresses its raptures,
Our hearts it definitely captures!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 23 September 2008

while I see the spring is next, My mind start- oh spring! oh dear come! fine expression koyel! ++++10 khub chamatkar bhashar bunon hoyechhe!

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Shannon D Smith 23 September 2008

I that was a great poem! ! +10

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Deepti Agarwal 24 September 2008

yr work has definately captured r heart.. :) with good rhyming sceme...n lovely picture... :)

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Anjali Sinha 24 September 2008

scenic beauty in spring displayed nicely as if on canvas. full 10+ love anju

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 24 September 2008

so beautiful....very good 10

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 23 December 2008

Lovely! keep writing! Dear, friend. Would you like to read and comment on my newest poem, Lost Forest's Ancient Chant, Terrace of Violence, Hymn To Star, Hymn To Sun, Cascades of Caprices, Fountain of Fearless Fiance, Children Song, Valley of Heart, Mata Hari, Song To Society, Visibly, etc.please? Thank you very much.

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Rakhi Jayashankar 01 October 2008

kool poem a 10 for the poem and a 10 for the rhyme

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Edgar Andrade Baguio 27 September 2008

Well, nice rhymes....cool spring descriptions....

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Joseph Poewhit 26 September 2008

A very pretty poem filled with emotions

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 26 September 2008

And now waiting for springtime I can read this delicate 'Spring', written with bucolic inspiration in Virgil style.

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