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no....surreal...all de-folk-cussed.... like a minor plague of locusts.... seeming 'insight'......( .........
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delilah contrapunctal.... yes, that's how I intended to spell it.........
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Theodora Steinbrueck-Onken (12/12/2007 12:09:00 AM)
And D., with the way you write...it brings out the best in all of us, at times...your unique and adorable way of getting some important issues out there, only tells me, what a creative genius you really are. Life lasts but a second, and it is gone...Too short for all the suffering, all the hate...Before we all know it, it will be way too late!
Love your poetry.Never have viewed anything like it, anywhere else.
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Alison Cassidy (12/6/2007 6:45:00 PM)
The easy rhythm and the joyful play on words marks this original and very clever response to 'dark' times - global and/or personal perhaps? Your final stanza is spot on - and shows the silver gleaming from underneath your melancholy cloud. love, Allie xxxx |
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