Sporadic Feelings 01 Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Sporadic Feelings 01

Rating: 4.9


1. PC mouse key-board
Online virtual world peeps
Cyber placid hub

2. Micro insect bug
Sits on the micro flower
Metaphysical romance

3. Glow worm in the brain
Candle-light dinner offer
Poem rapped sandwich

4. Angler from the bank
Hold out some bait set a trap
A poem hunting chat

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shashendra Amalshan 26 May 2009

hey very cool indeed..soooo very coool..Infact I chat a lot too..anyway a short and sweet phrase sir, thanks 10+++

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Anjali Sinha 26 May 2009

lovely sporadic feelings a poem hunting chat lovely ++++10 anjali

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C. P. Sharma 26 May 2009

Amazing poem hunting tips Ahanks a lot for sharing CP

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Mamta Agarwal 27 May 2009

enchanting observations- presented elegantly as a bouquet of Haiku 10 Mamta

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Fiona Davidson 27 May 2009

Wonderful senyru Ashraful...so many images here...10+++

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Sandra Martyres 08 June 2009

Surrealism in miniature poetic doses...nice ones indeed...10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 07 June 2009

Stunning surrealistic images.

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Brishti Mazumdar 03 June 2009

Poem rapped sandwich with Metaphysical romance.....! ! ! Wow......Ashraful, You are wonderful in your thought process...Brishti Mazumdar

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John Tiong Chunghoo 30 May 2009

a metro feel. you do live a metro life do you

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Lillian Thomas 29 May 2009

these are some light whimsical haiku or senryu in some cases, oh heck, let's give them the accolades they really deserve: these are truly CUTE. 'Glow worm in the brain' how cute is that! But my favorite, the cutest of the cute is: 'Micro insect bug Sits on the micro flower Metaphysical romance'

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