Split Complementary Poem by Edgar Andrade Baguio

Split Complementary

Rating: 5.0


I came
You go
I served
You deserved

You choose red
I like green
You watched towers
I touched flowers

I chewed some berries
You ate more strawberries
I simplified the moments
You verified time torments

Do you really like black?
Do I really look white?
Either which one is irrelevant
To this life’s cruel redundant

We better learn fast to ride
Horses on the rocky mountain side

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I like thsi poem, dear Edgar Baguio, because it tries to bridge the opposites, and that in the end it manages to give a surprising poetic proposal (riding horses on the rocky mountain side) , that means a lot of common virtues and values at a risk (see my poem Blind Fingers) Thanks for sharing.

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Edgar Andrade Baguio

Edgar Andrade Baguio

Lapu-Lapu City, Cebu
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