Teddy temple


Splash Of Sunhine - Poem by Teddy temple

Lonely by the lake shore
So calm, quiet and the tides low
Staring at the horizon
Picturing if it would be a friendship zone

In this desert of love
A lonely heart is all i have
A little splash of sunshine
Will make me feel fine

At midnight, when it is scary
My heart also weary
This splash, like midnight sun
Makes me feel like am a king's son

Splash of sunshine
Precious like goldmine
My companion when am all alone
My hope when all is lost and everybody is gone


Comments about Splash Of Sunhine by Teddy temple

  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (8/5/2013 9:28:00 PM)

    splash of sunshine nice title. keep writing (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Jesse Ellsbury (7/23/2013 7:16:00 PM)

    I really like the near rhyme in this: alone/gone, horizon/zone. And using the verb splash to describe sunshine is so well-placed. Nice job! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 23, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 24, 2013


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