Spider, Spinning, Smiling...... [spider; Short; Humor; Revenge; Creation; Fantasy] Poem by Bri Edwards

Spider, Spinning, Smiling...... [spider; Short; Humor; Revenge; Creation; Fantasy]

Rating: 2.5


The big black and hairy spider
slipped quickly up beside her.
She, a helpless buzz-less fly,
had landed on web; I knew not why.

'Welcome to my lair my beauty.
You certainly are a little cutie.
But, wait! What is that you've got?
Oh, my god! I think I've been shot! '

'Serves you right, you lousy brute!
It's death for you, but first, pain to boot!
Last week my brother came buzzing by.
You ate him and now each night I cry.'

The spider, as he was sinking fast,
managed to speak with his last gasp.
'I'm sorry for your grief, and I don't lie;
I was created to eat what does fly by.'

(October 12, 2014)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i recently had meant to write some poem about a spider and its web. i've written at least two other spider poems which i have on PH. i was reminded of my intention when i ran across a nice little poem today on PH: Spider's Web by Ngoc Nguyen.

the story in my poem never happened............as far as i know. bri :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sally Plumb Plumb 16 October 2014

I'm scared of spiders..... so i can appreciate your poem.

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Valsa George 15 October 2014

Quite an intersting tale....Sweetly rhyming and rather funny! When we try to trap others, we might also fall in traps! 'Serves right'!

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Douglas Scotney 12 October 2014

I agree, there's all of that, Bri.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2014

Very beautiful and meaningful poem. Spider is nice.

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