Spider And Moth Poem by Tan Pratonix

Spider And Moth

Rating: 5.0


In front of the mirror, tilted downward,
Clad in a slip and plaiting her hair,
Black-brown tresses silk-shining, the girl sits
Absorbed in the silence.

The shaded bulb sheds pale lemony light
Slipping down the wall behind her, down the picture
Of marigolds blooming, a brown-speck spider
Crouched near the frilled sleeve
Of the blue party gown on its hanger...

When it happens!
Out of the shadows beneath the gown, a pair
Of light-bark wings blunder upward, strike
The hanger, sleeve, and fold.
The brown speck rushes, an infinitesmal scrunch,
And moth-wings beat, blood breaks
On a wild white shore...I am watching
An agony, a wonder.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Dorn 22 April 2006

An epic battle of survival played out brilliantly. Excellent write! Brian

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Dan Tharp 14 April 2006

Nature at its finest! Agony on one hand / wonder on the other. Beautiful and yet gruesome at the same time. dan

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 28 February 2006

such a vivid picture....nice!

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